Careful - indie IS a subgenre, Rock being the main genre. You need to make a list of people to use as models (first name only). For your list of adjectives - use more precise and effective vocabulary to show exactly how you want readers to feel. It the last row about events - you need to refer to local events within local venues. This can be researched easily and is evident in real local music magazines. Show evidence of research that has informed your decisions!
Careful - indie IS a subgenre, Rock being the main genre. You need to make a list of people to use as models (first name only). For your list of adjectives - use more precise and effective vocabulary to show exactly how you want readers to feel. It the last row about events - you need to refer to local events within local venues. This can be researched easily and is evident in real local music magazines. Show evidence of research that has informed your decisions!
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