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Pass - AT THE MOMENT
ReplyDeleteWork needs finishing, the work you have written so far is working towards a merit as you have put detailed writing into your piece.
In this report you are good at explaining what you have done so far and explaining how you got where you are now by explaining how you started your questionnaire.
To improve, you need to first of all finish this piece and the sentences could be a little more professional.